Thread: 1st Freestyle(peep plz i can only get betta right?)
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Old 10-19-03, 02:21 PM   #11
redragon
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This was a pretty dope piece.
Work on your vocab,metties,wordplay and structure.Make it longer.
Overall:6/10
*return the favor on my piece,goodfight goodnight*
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