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Old 10-19-03, 03:39 PM   #5
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ima go with understatement .
he stayed with the coin theme throughtout his verse.
tik came ok.. ive seen that emotion a lot before though..
i liked ya closer, US and the coins rotation line.
"i flip the coin and watch it turn".. simple but good line tik.
keep it simple. its better to read good simple verses with understanding in them than failed attempts at wordplay and punches.