deacon.. stop swaying.
dont be a hoe.. i dont like them..
although i did think you won .

deacon- kept it short and sweet. a good read. rhymed, nice font (lol). good imagery, let me use my imagination.

edicus - urs was also good. seemed rushed and forced. probably not nearly your best. a bit too long... shoulda kept it short like deacon's.. good imagery, not quite as good as deacons .

vote- deacon.