I had a hard time catching Bribe's flow. I think there were instances of secondary rhymes interupting primary rhymes, throwing me off. However he supplied good imagery in an execution that demands it. He also did well with the topic, writing a verse around it. This is where Ill-Mental loses big. It would be hard for me to vote for a verse which I believe completely tacks on the notion of the topic at the end, in a prose closing. How tricky and clever... It was a pretty good verse too. Too bad, recycle it for another topic and see how you do.

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