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Old 10-19-03, 08:31 PM   #8
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oh
well this was actually a pretty good battle

bribeone-your verse hurt my head, but it was the kind of hurt a dominatrix administers. I Loved the pain =). Your multies were dope, and you still managed to tell a bit of a story without having any real characters. You are really good at flipping topics. Great Verse Man.

Ill Mental- Your verse was too simple. The beginning was nice, but it seemed that you changed your whole verse in the middle into being something it wasn't. It seemed like a fairly innocent piece and then you busted out this ground breaking information that didn't make very much sense at all. I suppose that's because we're kept naive, right? =)

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