^thanks feeble. Just a few notes.
Don't freepost in your battle. Don't sway in your battle.
okay?

Feebs-Your verse was very short. The flow was amazing. Your wordplay was really cool, and the imagery was fucking off the hook, no matter what your line said. I could see each thing happening as I read, and it told a very good story. The plot was thin, and I'm not a fan of that net gankstuh shit, but it was still dope.

T-Square- Your verse did not flow very well. Your rhymes seemed all forced, like you used the first word that rhymed that came to your mind. There was little or no wordplay. The plot was okay, but it wasn't illustrated very well. I liked the City that never sleeps line. Conclusion was cool.

vote-feeble

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