Shabaz- You can do better than that! if you formatted it better, it would have been really dope. Your wordplay was really good, I enjoyed the verse, but it was an eyesore my friend. You should work on flow too, because it is your major weakness in every piece I've read. You stayed on the topic well, but there was not much of a flip. That I saw.
Chrit-You killed this. Your verse made me ejaculate. It was a really dope verse with really dope wordplay and imagery, and the closer sealed the topic and made the verse complete. Very well done my friend. You are facing me next week
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