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i see the building's sky light, and poke my pistol through
as i watch the moon shine down on me w/ crystal views
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my favorite line from u feeble, ur verse was pretty decent, liked the begining better then the end, the story of it all wasnt great but the way u wrote most of it grabbed my attention, good work.
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Bust, oh shit, Our nations motto's in god we trust, so should I pray/
Hit...Oh Shit I got back to twenty, at least I keep half my money/
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favorite line from sqaure, ur verse was inconsistent, some good lines & some really out of place lines also. ur flow was off & u really need to work on evening out ur lines, but not bad. .
My Vote - Feeble