MM-rushed again? for god sakes, if you were rushed and your produced that, I want to see how dope you are with no rush. I didn't get it. The symbolism and metas seemed really good thought. I thoroughly appreciated the over the hill reference thought it gave me something to push off of for the rest of the verse lol. Great concept, little understanding. You need to elevate your flow.

Lib-You had a nice concept, and I liked the whole "based on a true story" steez. It had a great message, the perseverence thing, but I dislike things that end in death since it has become rather commonplace now. You need to work on your flow.

vote-MM

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