good work from both..but for the breakdown.....

Ryan-I can see u have many good concepts in your verse
but the flow just throws it off....work on your scheme and
you will move up a lot.......cause i can see good imagery
and hidden meanings being worked.

Chrit-well chrit what can I say your getting better at this
constant flow and rhymes just fit the whole story
together very well.....Props on a good one..


vote-Chrit.........

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