hmm--onslaught ya had an ok flow, ok structure, not real hard punches though---jus-10 ya had an aight flow, ok structure, just a little harder on the punch-tip--vot=jus-10

jus go peep my battle with onsalught too it's in my sig 2nd one and vote--vote on the one with necrid rd 2 if ya want thanx-----oneee