T-Square's verse had a good deal of rough edges. I didn't have any problem with the flow through much of it. And considering that he took many more chances and had a more involved subject, AND it was long, is fine by me. Feeble's verse didn't mean a whole lot to me. The imagery is the strength here. Both had a hold on the topic, one was more abstract, but that makes it no less attached. This fantasy-facade gangster doings doesn't make it for me. It verges on battle/bragadocio material. Maybe if this unfolded into a greater depth, it could win, but as is it's a solid technical piece that falls short in a number of ways for myself.

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