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Old 10-20-03, 08:54 AM   #9
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Oh well , thats ur opinon , ...under, oldo in my opinion , ..it wsnt forced, ..it maybe looks to u like it is but its not, ..

When u use high vocab , ...dsnt mean its forced, its writin, not audio..and i think the flow restored at the end of the lines, ..but its to bad, that when u have hard words, in a row, people think its forced, ...

But 3-2 Deacons way...

U had a nice verse, ..poetic,..and short, ..but to me it wsnt totally on topic, ..but still a nice piece...

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