U want honest?...

Try to write, ...real....urs is to played, ...or at least try to write, ..like u bein thru it...

Not i take my nine, ...and shoot em up,
now hes dead,cant fukkin move hes stuck. Blah! shit try to be creative, ...use more vocab ,and not that played aspects, ...
keep writin, ...

Hit up , ...Stand Proud, ...and ull see...maybe u can learn somethings,....

Pz

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