^^ mmk that ish scared me a bit... but to each's own

The peice was definatly original, the red roses don't thing got me in here... promising title. The phone conversations were cool, no joke I could hear them in my head! Nah I'm not crazy... But the rest, it was too story telling for my blood, it was like you put all the substance you had into the phone conversations and left it out when portraying the feelings. No doubt it was a good read, but ya vocab an rhyme scheme were all over the place... keep elevatin, an don't loose your creativity