Yeah i agree...this was a good piece...it made a good read....it flowed pretty nicely through out the piece as i read it....your multies were good as well...your vocab was alright...structure was alright too...overall it was a good piece i thought...keep at it...and keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86721