Yeah i agree it was a pretty good drop...it flowed pretty well i thought through out the piece as i read through it...your vocab could be up'd a little bit...you had wordplay in there...also had some multies...I liked reading this one, it was good..keep at it...and keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86721