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Old 10-20-03, 02:55 PM   #2
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Pull out the pen, position paper on the end and I. .
Possess punches that are a pain in the ass like enemas
Often found in cinemas,
Sent from hell, so it's seen it's sins I'm with. .
And arrogance,
Exposing a bigger mouth than kids from Aerosmith
I'm errorless,
^^started off ill nice way with words

Insaney wits, Shakespeare isn't comparable. .
It's terrible,
How my notes can simply rip apart a fucking stereo
But really though,
I constantly rebel against regular rhythm and rhyme. .
Ahead of my time,
The Bull of rap; always holding the Mic in its prime
Upholstering mine,

^^ shit was bangin holmes nuthin really bad to say yet

Deciding dreams and controlling my destiny. .
the rest should be,
Holding a ShopVac before starting a mess with me
Yet cleverly,
Click clack and constantly collapse on boys. .
and be destroyed,
Then show you my instant image like a Polaroid
The tolls enjoyed,

^^nice multis

Self employed, I'm known to oversee the rest
Envict with zest,
Because my power runs in the family like incest
I'm the best,
Bastards say they're God, I'll go with sacreligion
My wrath envisions,
That saying clear of me is wiser than my aphorisms ....

^^^shit had ill wordplay and nice multis


overall this was a nice piece had some real creativity and wordplay...multis was off the meat hook

8.5/10mics

return the favor on my open mic WE TIRED ft MASTA C
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