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Old 10-20-03, 03:06 PM   #5
Menik
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Yeah i agree...it was ok...your structure could have been better, a bit weak...it flowed alright though as i read it...your vocab was alright too...content was good i thought...try to make your lines the same length though....but overall it was a ok drop...keep at it..and keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86721
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