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Nick went to the party that night, and drank himself into a stooper
But Nick didn't care that he couldn't remember, to him their was nothing cooler
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Mad Man - Your verse seemed almost forced, I did like that line I quoted but I felt there were to many 'He' & 'Nick' within the verse.
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Those Who Once Lead, Now Take Opposite Roles.
Look Ahead, Back Stepping Leaves Empty Souls.
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Sureal - Alot of wordplay, really enhanced the read, didnt need the story telling, I really liked this peice, good work.
Vote - Sureal
Final Comment: Sureal just had an overall better verse, the wordplay & flow was alot better then Mad Mans, Mad Man ..
had a good concept but I really didnt feel the way he expressed
it worked for me.