Yeah this was a pretty decent piece i thought....it flowed pretty well as i read it...Try adding some more internals to it...your had pretty good multies i thought...structure was good too...your vocab was pretty good...You had good metas in there...overall it was a pretty decent piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.

and if you could leave some feedback..
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