now that''s a pretty tight keystyle, tight vocab, tight flow, good use of wordplay, tight structure and a very very good use of vocab. can't really see anything that's really wrong with this piece, good job man keep it up.

if u got the time peep out mine and Masta C's collab called "disguised by death" and leave some feedback plz, thanx in advance.

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