yo ill verse dude. i really enjoyed reading it, at first i was skeptical bout open mic...and inever checked that section out yet but now im pretty sure there is some tight mcees in here. good to know this site isnt just about battling....

but yeah reallllly good flow everything linked real nice through rhyme and ideas just came along nicely. good vocab and creative rhymin words...shit i haven theard yet. also you got a good pattern in the flow/creative rhyme scheme. nice verse.