yo man tight piece for just startin here. like rhyme scheme here and ur content was good, flow and multi's were down and ur structure was pretty tight. u aslo did a good job on stayin on topic. keep droppin bro.

an if u got time check out mine and masta C's collab "disguised by Death" and leave us some feedback. muchly appreciated thanx in advance. peace.

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