Damn... nice collab... first off.... the Hook was nice... intro'd the track well..... Word, that was one of the best verses i've seen from you... really deep and had me vibing to it*I rap out loug everything i read* .... you've really up'd ur game since i've been gone,,,,,,,,

AT- never seen anything from you but you came out strong... some lines didnt make much sense but thats something you can work on... dont focus on forcing the flow too much... try to just get what ur trying to say out there and format it to flow better.. try to work on ur structure... you have potential... keep writing..



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