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Old 10-21-03, 07:49 AM   #3
lillem
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i see this battle just finished up so im a vote on this shit. I think both of you lacked punches. You both got ok flow. Ferrari, ya verse seemed to just swing out and not actually hit anything. Think you should stop wit da story telling and just hit wit personals. You have the nack but not da punch. Toner, you came weak aswell, i felt you had just a lil better structure and some lines close to end there are what you should be putting through all ya lines. You should battle 10lines next time. Cause both stray off and come weak. Keep it short and hit hard, its better that way, until you get better skill. No hate just advice....

Im gonna go on toner..My vote that is....