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nice peice dawg.. i know this came from ur heart as i read it.. i almost felt like i was in ur place.. though i cant say that i suppose.. but u helped out the peice with the very clear imagery and vocab and the flow was just so real...
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Suicide attempts but sadly to no avail-
Im locked up in this body and cant afford bail.
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damn dude.. i felt this one deep.. reminds me of someone i know all too well.. deep. hope to see more, 1love.
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