Yeah this was a nice piece...it was worth the read i thought...it flowed alright got off track at times but it was still good...add a few more internals to help the flow out...Vocab was fine i thought...good way to open it up, i liked that...overall it was a nice piece..keep at it...and keep dropping.

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