word looks like a free poster

this drop was iiight

structure was good, flow was average, vocab was average, just an average drop (no offense)


few fillers in the verse as well, thats what kinda spoiled it

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Ain't no use in screaming amongst all the scheming
Everybody wanting cream & flossing and gleaming
^^ okay lines

rhyme scheme was average, nothing too hot

6.8/10

try and elevate more on yer open mics and keep spittin gurl