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UPPIN 4 VOTES. WHO WAS TIGHTER?
HIT A NIGGA ON THE POLLS AND NO D/R PLEASE.
JUST AN HONEST VOTE WILL DO.
MY HONEST OPINION:
yOU ARE COOL JOHNNY, GREAT WORDPLAY, BUT YOU KINDA LOST ME IN THE MIDDLE OF YOUR RAP. NEED A LIL WORK ON THE STRUCTURE, GOT A FEW RUN ON LINES, BUT ALL IN ALL IT WAS COOL. KEEP WORKING AT IT, YOU GOT THE GIFT. IT JUST TAKES TIME TO DEVELOP. PM ME AND I'LL DROP YOU SOME HOT EXCLUSIVE SHIT. NOT MY B-GRADE BATTLE EFFORTS.
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The excellence of elocution
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