1. ~D~Abyss~

"Like~parkinsons or virus's i wreck ya A.I.M n peel~ya~skin
Im~straight~laughin~son how this pussies wet n no wins~cummin~in"


^^^That right their wasnt bad. That was pretty much the only Punch that really stood out to me in your whole verse. You were consistent with your punchs but in my opinion they werent hard hitters nah mean???


2. Dominator

"After 1 Bar these cats will have e'nuff of your stuff ~ theyd rather see Fat Bastard in the buff /
With ya tough guy avvy all thinkin you be rough, shit man your nothin but a cream puff //"


^^^HAHA....that was kinda funny, them bars stood out to me. Your punchs were kinda soft to in some aspects. Tho you were alot more consistant with them and made them fit better then A-byss did. And like what o'boy above me said....when you type of your verse, please, please, PLEASE DONT MAKE YOUR WORDS BOLD.....shit looks corn ball and makes you look herbish nah mean???

All in all i think this was a pretty weak battle, but both of you are new to the site and still have alot of learnin to do so i aiighnt hate'n on either one of you. Just keep battle'n and uppin yallz skillz and elevate....

My Vote = Dom

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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
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