This was a good piece...Realist part was good, it had good flow...it was structured very well...i liked the content, made a good visual..vocab was good as well...Sureals part was good too...vocab was good..structure was nice...flowed real well...overall i really liked this piece, it made for a good read, very nicely done, the concept was real good too...keep at it.

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