damn kids, good job here
masta... both verses were good but you do need to up the word choice... your flow was great here...i liked the 1st verse more

gene...good job, im not used to reading alot of your so i cant give that great advice... flow needs little work...your vocab and multis could be touched up here or there....'sides that good job

Great collab gents
Masta already hit this up, but im leaving it here anyway
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87052