Nice deep shit...feellin what you sayin..cudda done with a lil more complexity most your lines one sylabel rhymes n one per lines...shit picked up here...

I felt like a machine, someone else controlled my actions
Life split into fractions, couldnt stay away from the distractions
I wonder how this happens, how do we lose individuality
Live's steered away from reality, not allowed a personality
Givin a certain mentality, but they lack originality

That was tight..best section

lotta cats here hittin the poetry vibe...some deep shit...flows pretty much perfect..overall cudda done wit more complexity..props deserved

Keep Droppin