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Old 10-22-03, 10:31 AM   #2
Edicius
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This was a real nice ...Piece of writin..

U used a real nice and high vocab, combined with a nice flow

A good concept..

Nicely those multi's..

Goos job on that one..

Enjoyable piece,...

Overall a good piece..

I could break down , ..on what u could do better, but its fine the way it is...

Props..
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