Eddy.
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IP:
This was a real nice ...Piece of writin..
U used a real nice and high vocab, combined with a nice flow
A good concept..
Nicely those multi's..
Goos job on that one..
Enjoyable piece,...
Overall a good piece..
I could break down , ..on what u could do better, but its fine the way it is...
Props..
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Fuck you
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