yeah, it did seem unfinished but what you had up there wasn't bad, flow was cool like always, pretty good wordplay, and yo I don't really see this as topicless, at least your talkin bout something somewhat narrowed down, struggling, right?, its not like it's just some random stuff that flows nice... I'm feeling that... I don't really see nothing bad about the structure...
worst part about it is that you didn't finish it... it also wasn't much on vocab, but fuck it... anyways, thas it man...

Peace

oh yeah, check out my piece "can't write about it" if you got time, shit's been getting slept on... lol...