sorry i went a little over.............................................. .................................................. ........................................ it's 14 lines instead of 12, but those xtra 2 lines NEEDED to be there! naw' mean?
any wayz:
LM: YOU DID PRETTY FRIGGIN GOOD BACK THURR, DAWG; I REALLY LIKED YOUR ENDING- "...LEAVE YOU CONCUST." THAT WAS TIGHT! THE ONLY THING I THOUGHT WAS NOT RIGHT WUZ THA FLOW... BUT THEN AGAIN, I DON'T KNOW WUT BEAT YOU WERE FLOWIN' TO! KEEP IT UP, DAWG, AND KEEP THE PEACE.
- NNY

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