this piece was ill, nice vocab, nice structure,your rhyme scheme was a bit off, tight multis, tight wordplay, well laid out, some of it towards tha end sounded forced a little but other than that this piece was ill, check out tha second part of my "become one with reality" i wrote it a couple of days ago but it was all tha way back on tha second page.keep droppin tha hotness.~1~