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Old 10-22-03, 06:42 PM   #3
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yo ne beef but Ink took this one... I liked his punches


i'm the uppercutter it's a known fact, & stratus's another sucker
see i dont just break your bones, i'll shout domino mutherfucker
^^NICE
quit lieing, ur no chip off the old block, lets see this twit crying
cuz the only thing to "run in your family", was me with fists flying
^^CREATIVE
i'm upping paces, yet it's my time this fuckers wastin
Mr.Inkwell wont 'bat an eyelid', i'll club your fucking face in
^^JUST PLAIN MEAN, GOTTA LOVE THAT

to me those lines is what took this...

Stratus you had a decent verse too, but when peeps bvreak their verses up like you did with your first two bars, it shows weakness in your structure and flow ability. props to both though,

vote = Ink


could yall hit this battle up w/ an honest vote

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87114
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