it was alright, some lines just seemed to be put in there for padding...but the topic was good...flow was mad choppy, sometimes i had to re-read the lines, which isnt always good...but the lines that you had and flowed were good cuz they were all on point with the topic...just keep getting better in everyway...expand vocabulary and everything...we all need too, me especially...nice work though

holla at one of mine "Figure me out" and "Too easy"

peace