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Old 10-23-03, 01:36 AM   #9
Gene Pool
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yo man thas some tight shit, some real nice vocab in this piece and ya flow was down pact, had some tight wordplay, could use some more multi's, but I'd have to say everything else was pretty much on point and also u had some pretty tight lines.

Oh you an iller m.c.? prove it to me-
Put a thermometer to your larenex …
and spit some text to measure the degree.

^^was feelin that fo sho man.

props to ya bro keep droppin.

if ya got the time check out my piece "Bloodied Dreams (sleepless nights)" and leave me some feed. thanx in advance man. peace.
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