Beat Is Nice..Intro Might Be a little too dragged out man..Ahhh your vocals sound a little too low..turn em up a bit..don't let the beat over-ride em coz its hard to understand you fully man...from the sound of it...sounds like you could up your delivery and emotion for like a real fire track you wanna really get some Fire into it like you mentioned and get some belief into the listener about what your spittin on so yeah mate just keep doin what you do and work on all aspects of your rhyming..the best teacher is experience ay so just go go go spit as much as you can and you will accelerate for sure...g'luck..Pz..

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