Yo Ayura... That's the first Rap post I read... it was tight an I feel good when compliments on my work come from someone as deep as you... keep it up an let me know when you ready to collaberate.

Fav lines

"I realise death is promised, but imagination isn't
Cus the leafs of my scroll's will breath my creation's wisdom
Graff'in the massive arm's of my creative construction
My art form embosses flames of raging combustion"

"I shine like black and white moonlight, blind sight's
Hopeless thoughts are captured in my creative life's"

I like this line coz I feel I can relate... Some deep shit.

"Bombard the elements, I sit on the star's thinking
With my pen and pad, my hearts content.........................."

Effective ending creating a suitable mood of hope, strive an your 'love'
(which is the main word here) for your poetry an music.

For the sake of RB... Keep it up.