Good read.. could an should have been longer... Like the overall peice, but I definatley agree that the first half was deeper than a lil.Kim could take it down her throat. I feel you started off think more bout what you wanted to say then concentrated more on the flow an structure as you got more comtable with your work... V.Nice

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