This was nice... vocab was decent... not to flashy... kinda simplistic... probably sound good in audio... there was one line that needed work though... the line...

you made me this way, so take it or leave it//
nice guys finish last, the playa in me you started seein//

I think it would've sounded better if it went...

you made me this way, so take it or leave it//
nice guys finish last, the playa in me you started 'to see and'//
i tried to get right, but you wouldn't allow it//

that's just my opinion... and that's what we here for right... peace