Damn E ... This piece was dope as shit ... Nice topic ... Got it across very well ... Good structure and all of that ...


why does love loss stay lost when its tossed through each & every occasion
replacement is not an option, facing a fear that the lesson watching
will teach something not willing to be absorbed, then easily forgotten
as a result.. my heart has gotten to be deformed, wretched & rotten
morphed into ice & bone, frozen from the world's cold shoulder


That was my favorite part in this piece ... I thought it was put 2gether perfect ... Deep too ... I really liked it a lot ...


sooner or later my ashes will be urned, concerned is my spirit
soul yurns to be whole again but the missing part doesnt hear it


Those two lines were really dope there too ...

Nice to see you comin' dope as always man ... Keep doin' your thing ... Peace