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Old 10-23-03, 12:49 PM   #5
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Chrit
Audio hell no... not with that lack of rythm...
Ya bones are like my bad habits... I'm now forced to break em...
... Hmm ... Aight ...
Quick to rip kids... Come with punches straight relentless...
Not a thug cause when he carries pumps it means his shoes dont fit...
... Coulda been worded better ...
Coming into this cocky?... I'll KO you but dont push me...
Otherwise I'll merk ya ass... But I dont usually eat pussy...
... Ha ... Dope ... Very ...
Old school kid... Man ya rhymes should stay retired
Av shouldnt even be at RB... Cept ya mom's jaw got tired.
... Hmm ... Dunno ...
Jack ya skills... After all I've stolen nothing in my life...
And watch as I lay it... While you just blow the pipe...
... First line of this was nice ... But 2nd was sketchy ...
This kid's obsolete... Much like an 8-Track collection...
Leave ya silenced with this... Then come back to cash ya check-in.
... Nice ...
Ya life is like existence of Bob... There is literally no hope...
Hang with Chrit in a battle? OK... I'll even show you the rope...
... Nice ...
Damn kiddo... How you even think you can beat me...
Push ya buttons for better verses.. starting with the delete key...
... Ha ... Good ...
Clash of the titans... Lets make this legendary and come nice...
And since both sides must be ill... I'll just post my verse twice.
... Dope ...
Not a FAG... but still bordering on being gay...
Careers in the fast lane.. but speeding the wrong way...
... Nice ... Coulda had a better finisher ...

Avalon
fat flow obese as ever... I'm shakin this whale,
Good things come to those who weight... but Chrit keeps breakin
the scale...
... Nice opener ...
& he's the type to write poop, no wonder no one likes you,
When ya battles raps suck worse than King Of Thieves open mics do...
... Nice ...
get some slim fast fat ass... I mean this faggots just ooze round,
he's throwin english curreny to sea... hopin ta lose pounds...
... Dope ...
Fat Fuck... ya plain Suck... Chrit stop with the burgers n' cakes whore,
keep ya 'eyes open' for ya next punch..? I'll drink coffee to make sure...
... Dunno ...
while he sucks a large coke... Chrit even bites the straws guys,
I never slept at night... Ryan not on RB's a' site for soar eyes...
... Blah ...
lines from my open mics leave this kid stuck when I quote it,
Cause when I said Av ghosted... for admins I meant for Chrit when Av wrote it...
... Dope ...
dickrider... Let's be honest Cryptic... in lipstick you do suck,
and with quotes... you add my drug name like... "Avalon's dope... PLUS..!"
... Nice ...
don't show up, calm ya nerves, stop pretendin you're rowdy,
Cuase battles are metaphors for ya sex life... both situations are cloudy...
... Dope wordplay ... Dope line ...
Av's bringin the feast on... you're a midget losin feet dog,
plus, only think you brought to the table is your booster seat homes...
... Ehhh ...
you clock is tickin... silently... soon you should fail fine,
n only time would tell... now you wishin you could tell time...
... Nice ... But coulda had a better finisher ...

Overall

This was a nice battle ... Both came with good verse ... But my final vote is going to have to go to Chrit ... Cuz he had some dope punches that I feel hit harder than Av's ... No disrespect tho ... That's juss the way I saw it ... Props to both tho ... Peace

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