damn, that was dope bruv.
you got madd talent. your pretty sick
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were takin place of many faces,some kind of revolution//
races of resolutions,makes grace mental polution//
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your complexity its earily similar to ricochet klashnekoff, great opening and it flowed propa sta.
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solutions of assasinations disgraces many leaders//
like pagons when the bible made changes for its readers//
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damn, dis pretty dope, your multis is stronger through out the whole peice, i could tell you took your time with this.
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im teachin two to learn four,how to resolve in such a violence//
cuz for one im sick of poor handlin cause,keepin us silent//
what kind of reign makes slayin people some kinda sport to keep em happy//
theyre making slaughter out of babies,theyve barely grown out theyre nappies//
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nice message to people listening, no frontin bullshit here, this is rap and the flow and multis is raw
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we see theyre armys wearin armoure, asif theyre scared of sudden pain//
courage is lost like zimbabwes farmers, or a trick by david blaine//
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i think you came a little weak here, cudda been improved abit, seemed like you added it for the length
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theres little action in theyre brains,so sudden thought is our advantage//
were causing hords of severe damage, by using simply designed old tactics//
thoughts of victorious days are frantick,chains dissapear from mental prisons//
one race mixed up makes one great kingdom,instead of sides,like off a prism//
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nice attack on the ignorant bastards, who's mind are complete butters, and have no intention elevating, nice line der
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they were the greater of both sidesbut little thought ended their reign//
our easy laws are here to obide that means lifes ride is much lesser lame//
the game of torture has now gone, living today is a time of goodness//
an easy reign is now so long, thanx to a little tribe of hoodlums..!!
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again, this is a great overall read, your flow came sick, and reminded me of ricochet klasnnekoff's message telling. wah blow you mos def got skill. overall a great read and all. keep uk alive bruv