riiight, interesting. You ever think of writtin plays for a livin? Cause there was some dramatic points in that peice most definatly! Some things that went over my head because of the lower constant rhyming but that did create a sense of urgency in the last few parts. This was a good peice, creative, not your everyday poem like half of us on her shell out. Good lookin, welcome to RB, an I'll be peepin more of ya stuff in the future. Peace