I dunno what happened with ya other posts, but dang lemmie read it. This was deep. I loved how you started with the alliteration at the beginning, and numbered the almost different stages in this peice... I could see some hate in this but for some reason I didn't feel like it was focused outside of yourself. Maybe because I felt the first two insults weren't something one would say to another person... But the rhyme scheme in this was pure brilliance! It was scattered to the naked eye but fell perfectly within rythm to the ear. You took simple words and coupled them with more complex thoughts and even words to make them a step up, a sign of true tallent. I am impressed with your work and I look forward to seeing some more in the future, peace